Checkpoint Week 2
Submitted by Maggs1181 on July 30, 2011
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Checkpoint Week 2
Hi Anthony,
I was able to read over your email and I was hoping to offer some constructive criticism. First off, I would like to say congratulations on your promotion. I can tell that you’ve worked really hard to obtain your goals! Now, regarding the tone in your email; I would like to point a few things out to you that I feel could benefit you in the future. You should never sit down to address a network of people when you aren’t 100% focused focus on the message that you wanted to send. You were on your way out with friends, so your judgment may have been a bit clouded. You should definitely make sure you are focused and free of distraction before writing...
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