Seven Schools
Submitted by madnotes on May 21, 2008
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Seven Schools
Shauna Birt
16 August, 2007
Jenkins Pd. 4
Expos Writing Hon.
Seven Schools
It all started in 1996 when I started kindergarten. My mom, Carole Hope, was and still is a teacher. As well as being a teacher she attended college night classes to get her masters in early childhood education. She was a single mother and we were not the richest people so she would use her tuition discount on me to the fullest. My mother taught at seven schools in ten years I attended six of those schools until I moved with my dad.
From kindergarten to first grade I attended St. John Vianny in Kailua. My mom got an offer to Lanikai Elementary to work and perfect their...
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COMMENTS
Well done! December 23, 2008
Grader: carolealoha, Grade: A
Shauna, I am happy you were able to reframe your past experiences of being in seven schools in 10 years resulting in a positive view of growing to be an outgoing person. One error was found in your essay. We did not return to St. Johns after Star of the Sea. You went to Kaelepulu School and I went to Ben Parker school. I am happy to see that you recognized that I did the best I could with the situation I was in with your best interest of the highest education experience possible at heart. When you are a mother I hope your children will be able to say that about you. ... Mom